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What do you think of this ? (Gfx)

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by BRUCE, Aug 28, 2013.

  1. BRUCE

    BRUCE Konvict Guest

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    cant post on forum too large

    My thoughts ive either designed a very good graphic, or designed a horrible one, whats has to much happening over doned, or very sick minded.
     
  2. BlindSniper

    BlindSniper Veteran Member

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    fixed it for you

    im no art expert, but id say it looks good
     
  3. AnunnaKii

    AnunnaKii Konvict Guest

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    Looks fine just hard to read the text at the bottom, your name i think. good job though.:cool:
     
  4. SamSync

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    In my opinion you've done a good job but it's hard to tell where you want the viewers focus to be.
    Is it the hands, the girl or the text that's the most important?

    I agree with the previous comment about the bottom text being hard to read.

    I also not sure what it is you wish to convey with this graphic; the word wrath along with the hands and fire does seem fairly wrathful but the girl and the font you chose for the text don't.

    For the more techincal part there's a sharp edge just above the girl that would look better being faded out as it steals focus now, the fire under the bottom text should probably be removed as it looks somewhat misplaced and "box" the image in.

    The fire on the hands looks a bit weird since it's only applied on top of the fingers. try looking at pictures of burning wood (or whatever) to see how fire behaves. If you look at the picture below you'll see that the fire touches not only at the top.
    View attachment 446

    For the credit I'd recommend making it a part of the design.

    Hopefully this will give you some tips for future creations.
     
  5. Vercis

    Vercis Konvict Guest

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    It's quite nice actually...